Blog Commenting

Today I made a comment on Brooklyns blog I thought she did good and gave me a lot of information

Transum Can do

Today I was working on a can do. The thing I found hard was getting numbers in order. The thing that I found easy was moving around different places.

Richard Pearce and the wright brothers time line

Today I was working on my Richard pearce and the wright brother time line. The thing I found hard Was writing alot of staff in my own words. The thing that I found easy was writing some of it by myself.

News Reporter

This is one of my can do's that I have been doing.

Rockets

Today I was working on my rocket presentation. The thing that I found hard was using different sites. The thing that I found easy was finding images and doing the Questions.

High Flyers Keyword Summary

Text: High Flyers

Read the text and record key words/phrases that answer these questions:

Who? Richard Pearce, Steven Kerr and Perry Duncan

What? Building, Plane, working together, friendship and helping each other

Where? Auckland point at school in Nelson

When?  This is Past tense

Why? Tv advertisement which is on heros

How? Using Material that the student had as prize. This Plane took 3 weeks to make

Summarise the text in 25 words:

Students	us	There	of	Built
point	Auckland	made	Weeks	film
Can	a	Advertisement	created	My
Richard	Plane	school	Make	his
Some	Copy	The	by	Actors

Blog Commenting

Today I was doing my blog commenting. The thing I found hard was writing the commenting. The thing I found easy was finding a person to comment to.

Narrative Writing

It was a warm sunny day. Me and my family were going down to the pools.

We went to the pools because we went to a birthday. When we got to the pools we had a little swim. Me and my sister Chavda went on to the water slide. When we got to the top chavda went first I was waiting at the bottom of the slide.

When she came down we went outside but Chavda ran and fell on her face but also on her left leg I helped her up but she had broken her leg, Chavda had to go to the hospital for a few days.

When we got there the doctor said “ She has to be here for about a week.  It was a week after Chavda came home. Chavda came home with a smile on her face. I ask “why are you so happy” she said I get to stay in a wheelchair.

I said “ what is so fun when being in a wheelchair”. Because mum said you have to make my lunch, breakfast and dinner after she said that she started to laugh. I got angry but didn’t care I did it anyway because after all she was my sister.