Revising sentences

Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing . Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing.

Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He is a tabby cat and can be a pain. He likes sniffing rubbish bins. He comes to my house staving. He always falls asleep on my couch. Oscar hates laptops. He’d rather sit on my lap and get the attention.

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