Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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Last weekend I went to the pools with my whole family. It was so wonderful and exciting spending time with my family and friends from my old school like Yasmin and Dawt mi.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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I went to the Pool’s on Sunday Afternoon at 5.00pm. I went with my Mum and Dad. I also went with my brothers and sister. The Pools I went to were the Jellicoe pools. It was really cool and while I was there with my friend Yasmin and Dawt mi we made a friend.
Her name was Brooke she was cool. Brooke’s sister made friends with my sister it was really funny. I felt really excited seeing my old friend and making a new friend because I haven't seen my old friends for ages. First thing I did at the pools was going into the warm pool.
Next we went in the outside pool it was really cold but a few minutes it got warm because we were in there for a while.
Then we had to go home and before I went I said goodbye but I didn’t want to go because I haven’t seen my friends in a long time. But I went and when I got inside I felt as lazy as a pig. So then I went to sleep and dreamed about me and my friends having so much fun at the park and us having a sleepover at each other's house.
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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I felt excited when I was at the pools because I got to see my friends and made a friend there to. I didn’t want to leave Yasmin and Dawt mi because ever since I was a little girl they will always be with me. That’s why I didn’t want to leave but I did.
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This blog is a record of my learning from Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. through to Tamaki College.
Friday, 30 October 2015
My Weekend Recount
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