Hunted House - Narrative

Names of my characters

Adam ( 18 )
Lisa  ( 12 )
Daisy ( 4 )
Ashley ( 9 )
James ( 19 )
Isabelle ( 6 )
Darken claws ( ghost )

One scary Halloween night Adam and his friend's had got lost and had know idea where they were so Adam's friend Lisa looked around and had appeared at this house. She went back to her friends and told them to come then she said “ look what I found “ everyone else's said “ well what did you find “ and she said “ I found a house we can ask them if they can help us find away back home so come on let's go". Then Lisa's friends followed and when they got there James said  “ no we can not go into there “  But as he was talking Daisy had walked to the door  and knocked. The door had opened by itself and then she walked in but as she walked in Lisa and her friends ran in and then they were walking with daisy scared. As all of them were walking the door slammed behind them and Adam said “ this is like what we watch on the movies". Lisa and all her friends kept walking with daisy but daisy was not scared at all. After that they walked up the stairs and walked into this spooky room then all of a suddenly they heard this voice that got a hold of daisy then daisy started to shake then a ghost showed up and then Adam said "what is your name" and he said “ darken claws “ and then daisy woke up and was normal and then she was scared. After that darken claws said “boo” and then Adam and his friends went runny out of the house and found there way back home. Darken claws was just lying in his bed waiting for his next victim.