Hunted House Narrative

Compound

Simple

Names of my characters

ages

• Adam ( 18 )
• Lisa  ( 12 )
• Daisy ( 4 )
• Ashley ( 9 )
• James ( 19 )
• Isabella ( 6 )
• Darken claws ( ghost )

One scary Halloween Night Adam and his friend got lost. They had know idea where they were or how to get out of the trouble they were in. So Adam's friend Lisa had a look around and had appeared at this house.

She went back to her friends and told them to “come, have a look what I have found “ everyone Else's said “ well, what did you find “  “I found a house, let's ask them if they can help us find away back home”.

Then Lisa’s friends followed. When they got there James said“ no way i’m going in there “. Then Lisa said “but this could be the only way of getting back home”. James thought about it and said “ I do want to go home but that house just look’s really scary and old”. All of a sudden the front door had opened by itself. Daisy walked in with her friends by her side.

James screamed out “IS ANYBODY HOME” but there was no answer. So then Adam said “let's just go back outside nobody is home anyway we can find our own way back home”. But as he finished his speech, all of sadden the door slammed behind them.

Daisy got scared and ran up the stairs with everybody else.

As they were walking through the hallway they found this room, in that room there were pictures on the wall of a little girl and her mum. There was a legend on that women and the little girl. The legend was that they were killed by a trader that had came in the middle of the night and killed these people and kept the house to himself.

Then Ashley had heard a nose and out of the blues a ghost jumped out and said in a manly scary voice “were you going”. They all went running out of the house and never came back. The ghost name was darkened claws. Darkened claws had sat on his chair that he died in. He just sat and sat waiting for his next victim laughing in a deep voice.